This week’s Flash Fiction Faction by Quill Shiv is a picture prompt. Head over there to read more Flash Fiction Factions.
As usual, I appreciate your comments, feedback and constructive criticisms.
Wordcount is 105.
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Samantha raised her hand but Mrs. Sweet ignored her. “We will not carry on until someone tells me how a marsh is formed.” Samantha yearned to take off her rubber boots and wade into the murky waters. She imagined the mud oozing through her ticklish toes. However her classmates thought learning was for losers, which resulted in a silent standoff between Mrs. Sweet and the class. “Me! Me,” cried Samantha impatiently. “Give the others a chance…aw!” While talking to Samantha, Mrs. Sweet took a step backwards and tripped over a rotting bridge piling. With a muddy splash, she landed on her bottom. The class broke their silence with unbridled laughter.
Very fun! What class wouldn’t love to see the teacher take a fall like that?
🙂
This is very funny! It reminds me of a time a water balloon came through the open window of one of my classrooms and broke open on my Maths teacher. 😀
Great job!
oops! Did they catch the culprit?
Thanks.
Sounds like a fun time for the class, but not the teacher. I would have jumped at the chance to see that happen to a few of the teachers I had in my younger days.
My story: http://authorbrandonscott.wordpress.com/2012/04/05/dont-look-down/
I was wondering what you would do. Sweet 105 words, Irene.
Cute! I really liked this. lol. Good job.
My attempt: http://unduecreativity.wordpress.com/2012/04/05/cajuns-and-crawdads/