Here is Julia’s 100 word challenge for this week. Please go here to read more flash fiction.
The prompt this week is ….‘aside. Now what was that rabbit late for,’ wondered Alice…..’ It is the last ten words of the piece written by Shade the Raven last week.
The first story is a continuation of An Invitation To Tea, my contribution to last week’s challenge.
The second story is a piece about young love, which is one of my favourite themes. 🙂
Wordcount for both stories is 100 including the prompt.
Hope you enjoy my interpretations. I welcome your feedback.
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Alice refused the old man’s offer of blood for tea. The rabbit looked disappointed, as it jumped from the table and hopped out of the cottage. Alice pushed her chair aside.
‘Now what was that rabbit late for?’ wondered Alice.
She followed the rabbit down a tiny footpath. The forest grew darker and the grassy undergrowth turned into thorny bushes. Alice sacrificed her arms to protect her eyes from being pierced. Tripping over an unseen root, she stumbled upon another clearing. Her blood froze, witnessing the scene before her.
‘Now would be a good time to wake up,’ thought Alice.
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A gigantic CGI generated rabbit hopped at a tremendous speed. In the last second before a certain head-on collision, the ‘Alice’ actress jumped aside.
‘Now what was that rabbit late for?’ wondered Alice.
The ensuing onscreen dialogues were lost on Justin. From the corner of his eyes he observed multiple colours flicker on Sarah’s face, making the moment more surreal. She reached for popcorn from the bag between them. He stuck his hand in, just as she was about to retract hers. The briefest of touches resulted. As if he were on a rollercoaster, Justin’s stomach made a double flip.
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These are brilliant. They fit together really well somehow! Thank you for a double helping of your talent!
🙂 Thank you
I enjoyed both of them.
Thank you!
both are pretty unique…they are good food for further thought! 🙂
Thanks
These are both fantastic, very well written and both different but fit together.
I used the last 10 words from your piece last week. I hope you liked it…. http://www.susankmann.com/2012/04/100-word-count-challenge-37-it-was-all.html
Thanks. I really like what you did with the prompt. 🙂
I agree, they fit together well.